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Old 2008-04-02, 00:42
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書き換えることが出来るだろうか。彼女の、その運命を。
Her fate - can it truly be rewritten?


  • Original Planning and Character Design: Hinoue Itaru
  • Scenario:
    Tanaka Romeo (Cross Channel, Kazoku Keikaku, Yume Miru Kusuri),
    Ryukishi07 (Higurashi no Naku Koro ni, Umineko no Naku Koro ni),
    Tonogawa Yuuto (Little Busters!: Komari's and Yuiko's scenario)
  • Music: Orito Shinji, Maeda Jun
  • CG: Shinorii, NaGa, Mochisuke, Tayama Minimo
  • Background Art: Torino
  • QC: Maeda Jun

Credits: klashikari @ Animesuki and Official Website

And a little contribution from me. I present to you, the full sized pic from the official website and also the logo (for your perusal):


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Old 2008-04-02, 01:18
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I thought this was just one of those things you'd see on April 1st
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Old 2008-04-02, 03:58
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書き換えることが出来るだろうか。彼女の、その運命を。
[I]Is it possible to rewrite? For that girl, it is her fate
I would have thought this was:
"Her fate - can it truly be rewritten?"
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Old 2008-04-02, 04:10
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boggart's translation was just literal to the point of being misleading. It implies that it is the girl's fate to rewrite, when in fact it is her fate that is being rewritten.
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Old 2008-04-02, 04:11
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I've just reproduced Klashi's translation over at Animesuki. I didn't actually proofread it... lol... maybe I should have. :P
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Old 2008-04-02, 06:03
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This'll either be awesome or a clusterfuck.
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boggart's translation was just literal to the point of being misleading. It implies that it is the girl's fate to rewrite, when in fact it is her fate that is being rewritten.
If the translation went literal, it would've been more like "Is it possible to rewrite? Her fate..." The を trailing the phrase would've precluded the type of declarative statement the original translation had.
And it's not specifically "Direction." Itaru is in charge of the Original Planning and Character Designs.
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Old 2008-04-02, 10:45
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And it's not specifically "Direction." Itaru is in charge of the Original Planning and Character Designs.
Yeah, I had noticed that. I kinda prefer NaGa's designs though. But, I suppose it's going to be awesome either way.
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Old 2008-04-02, 11:14
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boggart's translation was just literal to the point of being misleading.
As someone with a style that is often described as strongly leaning towards the literalism side of the spectrum, I'd like it if "literal translation" wasn't associated with "just flat out wrong/bad translation."
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Old 2008-04-02, 11:16
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You just know Maeda Jun would hijack it midway through and make it into an epic BAWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWfest :3

PS I am joking :3
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Old 2008-04-02, 14:02
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Yeah, I had noticed that. I kinda prefer NaGa's designs though. But, I suppose it's going to be awesome either way.
I also prefer Na-Ga's design over Itaru's. It will definitely be interesting to see what these scenario writers will do with this project.
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Old 2008-04-02, 17:42
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I know I'm already looking forward to it-Great Art, Great Music, Great Scenario writers...It's like an All-stars team.
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Old 2008-04-02, 17:51
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Looks like Keys got a double hit on my wallet with LB-EX and this. At least it will take a good bit before they finish it.^^;

Have a wallpaper y'all. I didn't take the staff off though (I don't have exactly photoshop) And despite the crappy thumbnail no it is not all boring green on the left XP.
<a href="http://img209.imageshack.us/img209/4623/rewritewpyi8.jpg" target="_blank"><img src="http://img209.imageshack.us/img209/4623/rewritewpyi8.th.jpg" alt="Free Image Hosting at www.ImageShack.us" border="0"></a>
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Old 2008-04-03, 00:36
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Looks like Keys got a double hit on my wallet with LB-EX and this. At least it will take a good bit before they finish it.^^;

Have a wallpaper y'all. I didn't take the staff off though (I don't have exactly photoshop) And despite the crappy thumbnail no it is not all boring green on the left XP.
<a href="http://img209.imageshack.us/img209/4623/rewritewpyi8.jpg" target="_blank"><img src="http://img209.imageshack.us/img209/4623/rewritewpyi8.th.jpg" alt="Free Image Hosting at www.ImageShack.us" border="0"></a>
I can give you all components of the actual picture separately if you really want it. :p That way, the credits down the bottom needn't be there if you wish.
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Old 2008-04-03, 01:05
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I don't know why but...this screams out "BUY ME!" louder than Little Busters or its EX version does. I'm fired up for information as it comes
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