[Release] Yoake Mae Yori Ruri Iro Na -Brighter than Dawning Blue- (Partial)

Originally Posted by Unregistered

http://puu.sh/3jbUO.jpg
38,000 -> 380,000

shortly after this^
http://i.imgur.com/VYjMlaX.jpg

[silvver]

http://puu.sh/3juak.jpg
"I won't tell anyone about this" -> "We won't tell anyone about this"

http://puu.sh/3juTY.jpg
"it's your guy's turn" -> "it's your guys turn"

http://puu.sh/3jwJN.jpg
"This house is the one place I can stay" -> "This house is the only place I can stay"

[Kovanca]

https://www.dropbox.com/s/3y7t8znotm7ru2d/Will.JPG
It was because Feena was with me,fighting will->with

I fixed most of the issues reported so far, and took note of the remaining. I'm particularly unhappy with that "38,000 kilometers" thing (man, that's less than the circumference of the Earth), but anyway... silvver, Kovanca and Unregistered™, thanks!

http://i.imgur.com/o4T63Lh.jpg
not sure if the 'veryy' is intended
and nice to hear from the man behind it all :D
thanks again erengy, I've been following the project since its start

http://i.imgur.com/tSRQkS1.jpg
Mai responds with an affirmate 'uhn' after which they bith play with the dogs,
the 'have fun' seems kind of out of place

affirmative*

[Kovanca]

https://www.dropbox.com/s/jmiqwk9rforqpo6/Fair.JPG
Natsuki's fair->hair flutters in the breeze.

[Kovanca]

https://www.dropbox.com/s/5cirmusyainw6p3/Treasure.JPG

I don't think its a typo but it sounds strange.

Ex:Natsuki's eyes glitter like she had found a treasure(not sure if this one is coherent with the translation though).

[Kovanca]

https://www.dropbox.com/s/g2iimxkazu73x7j/Your.JPG
It looks like your->my? body remembers how to swim.

Originally Posted by Kovanca

https://www.dropbox.com/s/5cirmusyainw6p3/Treasure.JPG
I don't think its a typo but it sounds strange.

Don't think there's any error there honestly.

http://i.imgur.com/KA4qHud.jpg
"your family is involved an accident" -> "your family is involved in an accident"

http://i.imgur.com/MktFFaN.jpg
"I haven't the slightest idea" -> "I don't have the slightest idea"

[Kovanca]

https://www.dropbox.com/s/imwvtp55kh4qtc5/San1.JPG
Oh yes,would you like to drink some tea, Tatsuya-kun->san.

PS:@Unregistered
Yeah, I don't think its a error, just sounded strange.

[Kovanca]

https://www.dropbox.com/s/frbu62r11k0uzx3/San2.JPG
Welcome back, Tatsuya-kun->san.

PS:Should I put these kind of typo in the same post(using edit) or different posts for each one?

[Kovanca]

https://www.dropbox.com/s/g5luvyddkp25j8v/Was.JPG
Was Mia was waiting for me to come home?
->Was Mia waiting for me to come home?